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Getting enquiries

How to write website copy that actually gets enquiries

A practical guide to writing website copy that turns visitors into enquiries: speak to the customer, lead with the outcome, and make the next step obvious.

Gavin Fawcett6 min read

Most small-business websites are quietly polite and quietly useless. They open with a warm welcome, tell you how long the company has been trading, and mention a passion for quality. All lovely. None of it helps the person who landed on the page decide whether to get in touch.

Good website copy isn't clever. It's clear. It answers the questions a real customer is asking, in the order they're asking them, and then tells them exactly what to do next. Here's how to write copy that does that.

Write to one person, not a crowd

The moment you try to speak to everyone, you speak to no one. Picture a single customer: the plumber with a full diary who wants more of the right jobs, or the parent looking for a tutor they can trust. Write as if you're talking to that one person across a table.

This changes your words. "We offer a comprehensive range of solutions" becomes "We fix boilers, and we turn up when we say we will." Read your copy aloud. If you'd never say it to someone's face, don't put it on the page.

Lead with the outcome, not the process

People don't buy what you do. They buy what it does for them. Before you describe your method, your years of experience or your five-step onboarding, tell them the result they'll get.

A good test: for every feature you list, add the words "which means" and finish the sentence. "We're fully insured, which means you're not liable if something goes wrong." "We reply within one working day, which means you're never left wondering." Keep the bit after "which means". That's the part your customer actually cares about.

People don't buy what you do. They buy what it does for them.

Answer the objections before they're raised

Every visitor arrives with a quiet list of worries. Is this too expensive? Will they mess me about? Do they even cover my area? If your copy ignores those questions, the visitor doesn't get reassured, they just leave.

So say the awkward things out loud. Be upfront about roughly what things cost, or at least how pricing works. State your area, your turnaround, what happens if they're not happy. Honesty reads as confidence, and confidence is persuasive. Vagueness reads as something to hide.

Make the call to action obvious and specific

A call to action is simply the next step you want someone to take. The mistake most sites make is being shy about it, or offering five options at once so the visitor picks none.

Choose one main action per page and make it unmissable. "Book a free call" beats "Contact us" because it tells the visitor exactly what happens. Put the button near the top, again in the middle, and once more at the end. Someone ready to act on the first screen shouldn't have to scroll to find out how.

Remove the friction

Friction is anything that makes getting in touch feel like effort. A contact form with twelve fields. A phone number buried in the footer. A form that asks for a budget before the visitor even knows if you can help.

Ask for the least you need to start a conversation: a name, a way to reach them, and a line about what they want. You can gather the rest once they've replied. Every extra field is another reason for a busy person to close the tab and mean to come back later, which they never do.

How we approach it at Build 76

Writing about your own business is genuinely hard, because you're too close to it. When we build a site, we help shape the words around one clear action and the outcome your customer actually wants, not a wall of features.

If you'd like to see how your homepage could read, we'll redesign it for free first, so you can look at it before deciding anything. No pressure, just a clearer version of your best foot forward.